Conquest At The Hospice Poem by Elizabeth Padillo Olesen

Conquest At The Hospice



For saying yes to be admitted
into the hospice, she has actually
accepted the seriousness of her
health case, that she is now
at the mouth of death.

She sends sms to dear friends
not telling that she is right at
the hospice but only wishing them
all the best in life that they
may keep their trust in God
to the very end of their days.

She knows how her daughters
have been saddened by her case
The medical treatment at the hospital,
taken so diligently each passing day,
has not really relieved her from
the agony in her mortal body.

And yet, during her last days,
as long as her lungs tolerate to breathe,
she uses the time to talk to friends,
sends them sms and wishes them all the best.
This hospice is her fortress of hope,
of courage to look at death face to face.

And we, who mourn over her last days,
realize how at this hospice, she has
vanquished the ugliness of death.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 22 October 2012

Thanks for appreciating this, Sue. Her way of dealing with her coming death was a great lesson to many of her friends. She died a month ago.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 19 October 2012

Thanks, Aung Si, for giving attention to this verse. Thanks also Babatunde for giving a very encouraging response. My friend died and one of the things I would like to remember her is her courage being demonstrated at the hospice. For me it was her gift to all of us who fear our own deaths.

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Babatunde Aremu 19 October 2012

...she vangished the ugliness of death What a great expression. This is a wonderful poem. You succeeded in presenting the agony of the last days of a hospitalised person in sonorous lines. Keep writing.

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Aung Si 19 October 2012

I enjoy the whole poem especially the last stanza.Loved it.

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