Lawrence S. Pertillar
Constructive Criticisms - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar
I appreciate your assessments.
And the time you have given.
But guess what?
The value I have placed on my life,
With the knowledge and comprehension...
Of my true identity that took me years to find,
With adjustments made to upgrade my mind.
And what I have obtained in the gaining of it,
Does not depend on your assessments.
Or your vocal beliefs on how I can achieve,
'I was just offering constructive criticisms.'
And I was offering my time,
To tell you not to continue the wasting of yours.
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