A Broken Heart Within Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar
A Broken Heart Within
A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!
A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.
It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,
Within.
Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one excited to be near,
In benefitted moments held dear.
It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,
Within.
A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!
A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.
Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one excited to be near
In benefitted moments held dear.
Interiorization of emotion! But Hope is healer Despair is killer. Despair poetically nicely chiseled. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Please read my Poems: Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] Enigmatic Navel or others. niv
A poem with such depth of feeling, , Hope good things come to you Lawrence Take care Love duncan
Time gone, Like the wind blows, Never returns again! Not to visit in inquisitive sits... With the one excited to be near In benefitted moments held dear. ....wonderful true words from heart....great
This poem is just so sincere and poignant.You build lines so skillfully and fill them with expressions that make others really Feel. Best wishes. A.
I, too, have been the victim of a broken heart. Nice poem. I have five poems, but they are not activated yet. Why does it take so long for a new poet? Some of them were posted three days ago!
Broken heart explains its state of affairs. Beautiful poem.
A broken heart within me knows, What loneliness is... When it is left to linger, And slowly grows to wither in wishes! experience of loneliness is very painful. it breaks the heart....... loss of wishes and despair rules the heart.. painfullll. very nice poem full of living emotions. tony
Full of feelings and loaded with lonliness. Well done my friend!
The loneliness within is the poet's chief source of Muse. You have fully exploited this facility. Thanks for this orgasmic write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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It kills me to read this because it feels as if what my heart felt has been written out by someone I barely even know.