Consumed Poem by Eman Awad

Consumed

Rating: 3.5


I saw you there, alone, just like me,
i wonder if you're hurt, if you're broken.
Have you lost your self in a reverie,
did you get too far with no word spoken?
I wonder if you lived my life,
where it became empty but you keep pretending.
Are you over that strife?
and where it start for you is where it's ending.
Where our eyes walk the same road and meet,
is when my lips utter words i've never said before.
After you say divine words and my heart beat,
i know i'm not empty when i'm with you any more.
What you mean by all those words,
is what i've waited my life to find.
You may've just build my worlds,
and you will always be on my mind.
Is the moment when our eyes met,
the very moment, when we fell in love?
Will it be a moment that i regret,
or is this the final story for i've had enough? ?
I won't say it's love from the first sight,
i know i've seen you before in my dreams.
And it didn't feel like love though it might,
but it felt so many things together like streams.
I felt a feeling never i've felt in times that passed,
i knew that love is so strong, so alive and it's path is perfumed.
Maybe for i'm hypnotized and i hope that it lasts,
on my way to you i can never feel it's fire without being consumed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shy Powder 13 July 2008

Ah, I like this poem, it's rounded. A bit choppy, but nice!

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