Cool Thrills Out There Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Cool Thrills Out There

Rating: 5.0

Skating upon Saturn's rings, on the outskirts of gold,
executing my double axel, in the brisk, season of cold.
The sole sound is of ice skates, spraying bits behind;
In rich, purple dusk, of the chaotic universe entwined.
A wide-eyed dreamer, in the red heartbeat of fantasy,
does slow twirls and excited spins, jumping uncannily!
Skating on concentric rings-the adventure of her life,
Stars shining all together, a hundred moons in the sky.

Cool Thrills Out There
Thursday, February 20, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,fun,purple,rhyme
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Photo by Adis Resic at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 26 February 2025

Evelyn, your poem is a wonderfully fun adventure of the mind! The imagery is so vivid and breathtaking. Thank you for this fascinating experience.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 February 2025

I like to write fantasy poems. Deepest thanks for your warm appreciation.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 February 2025

A brilliant and vivid depiction of the wonderful attributes of the second largest in our solar system. Its rings are indeed magical! A well crafted and executed poem!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 February 2025

I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this poem about Saturn, a lovely planet! Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation.

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