Skating upon Saturn's rings, on the outskirts of gold,
executing my double axel, in the brisk, season of cold.
The sole sound is of ice skates, spraying bits behind;
In rich, purple dusk, of the chaotic universe entwined.
A wide-eyed dreamer, in the red heartbeat of fantasy,
does slow twirls and excited spins, jumping uncannily!
Skating on concentric rings-the adventure of her life,
Stars shining all together, a hundred moons in the sky.
A brilliant and vivid depiction of the wonderful attributes of the second largest in our solar system. Its rings are indeed magical! A well crafted and executed poem!
I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this poem about Saturn, a lovely planet! Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Evelyn, your poem is a wonderfully fun adventure of the mind! The imagery is so vivid and breathtaking. Thank you for this fascinating experience.
I like to write fantasy poems. Deepest thanks for your warm appreciation.