I walked on this road
Without a worrying end
Three years long phase
I sensed a cordial shelter
No disobey, No distress, I thought...
But, now I sense a wrong head
As he neither talks nor buzz
He isolated me from his life’s weave
And made me aloof…
My friendship, he has triggered wrong
He needs me more, I know he does
But, he doesn’t call
Nor shows his love..
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Now I sense a fearful site
Where his sheltered ropes has turned loose not tight…
let go is the strongest sign of love...............! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a love will go nowhere...! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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'Now I sense a fearful site Where his sheltered ropes has turned loose not tight…' A nice piece.
a very good write on sincere feels...but believe my words...as long as he needs you more, what of loosening of ropes there to fear? impressive talking poem piece 10
It seems there is no end to this kind of problem to young women....another good piece on this subject...............9
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a deep toughts..finally freedom was given...nice concepts.. Ency Bearis