Monica O'Connor

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Corners Of My Brain - Poem by Monica O'Connor

2008

It's captivating,
You're motivating.
I'm contemplating
the words you're saying.

This can't be real,
how raw I'm feeling.
Stagger my breathing,
keep my heart beating.

Don't leave me now when I've just returned
From being lost for oh so long.
My hearts revealing its honest meaning.

You're in every word I speak.

You are my quick pace,
The words I speak,
the breaths I take.

You are what I can't escape
This love is on the verge of hate.
You occupy the corners of my brain,
Blocking off my capillary veins.

You'll always be the everything I could never be.


Comments about Corners Of My Brain by Monica O'Connor

  • (3/10/2010 4:23:00 AM)


    A sweet, tender and beautiful poem! ! ! 'This love is on the verge of hate' I loved this line very much.To be on the top of the hill everybody need first to start through the simple things.It's said that the famous Walt Disney before to build his great legacy well-known all over the world as Disney World, he used to make drawings in the middle of the streets gaining just five cents for each drawing.Then, the idea of Mickey Mouse came to his mind and he changed the whole world.The small things are those ones which lead us to the biggest ones.Don't worry about people say about your poems.Just do the same way I do - I receive all the stones that people throw against me as a way of building something better in the future.
    Keep writting Monica +10! ! ! !
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  • (12/15/2009 2:25:00 PM)


    thats quite alright Bou. this isnt one of my best, and with age i will get better. im sure HD is smug with himself for being experienced and educated, but i'll get there someday, so im not worried. thank you though: ] (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2009 12:41:00 PM)


    Monica - just ignore HD's comments. He's no poet (and no dervish either) and all the best work he posts here belongs to other people. (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2009 4:41:00 PM)


    Monica - your 'poems' stink - try reading good books - travellllll.... far away

    Many blessings HD
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 15, 2012


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