Corny Life Poem by Samar Sudha

Corny Life

Rating: 5.0


My thinking have lost the vision, art to explore.

Nothing could rejuvenate, willingness isn't much there in core.



Eyes get hard but find no sleep.

Pain is there but feeling isn't so deep.



When heart gets hurt at every step.

Hue gets fade, like enthusiastic lost the pep.



Sobs become the path of journey

Which were been smooth, was actually Corny.



-Samar Sudha

Friday, May 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 25 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Samar S. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 May 2018

Pain of loss does not allow to sleep. This provokes thought. When heart gets hurt this is so sad. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Samar Sudha 26 May 2018

Thanks for commenting and very right notice 'Heart gets hurt is sad' When a heart gets hurt, its pain comes over the WORDS

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