Correct It Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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It is no burden
But quest for heaven
That we resort to good things
And miss nothing

No one claims
And undergoes pain
Of ignorance
Even at once

Some people
Always struggle
To swim across shore
But never feel sore

It is life
And full torn strife
But we make it worth while
In our effort to walk an extra mile

So walk along
Even if wrong
Correct it when you feel right
But consciously never fight

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Wednesday, August 3, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2016

Parupudi Satyavenkatavinodkumar Thank you and yes the agitating mind and the goading heart sometimes take us to the brink of an inner fight, and thats when we need to correct our course of actions to fall in line with moving on...... __/\__ Unlike · Reply · 1 · 1 min · Edited

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2016

welcome Parupudi Satyavenkatavinodkumar Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2016

So walk along Even if wrong Correct it when you feel right But consciously never fight

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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