Shiva and Shakti
Dancing in union
Spirit and matter
Primordially paired...
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Paired primordially...
Matter and spirit
Union in dancing
Shakti and Shiva
© 2016
Pregnant with meaning and significance. This poem blends feeling with craftsmanship to create a cocktail that is so beautiful that words simply cannot express.
Very inspiring words from you, helps me to keep going and want to write more.
simply gorgeous poem. these are very difficult to write and you have done it with relative ease. look forward to more.
Am working on a few more. This genre is tricky for sure. Thank you for your comments.
This is a truly beautiful poem. The symmetry is exceptional and I loved reading it. Great job.
A palindromic poem written as though by a man at least four times older. You are very talented, my friend
Coming from you, that's the best any young poet can ask. Hope you are doing well. I totally enjoyed the poem Swifts today. A poem written by a master story teller.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow, this is superb imagination and a wonderful poem.
Thank you sir, appreciate your comments for sure.