Lunar Dance (Haiku) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Lunar Dance (Haiku)



ripples on the lake
reflect many dancing moons~~
will you be my date?

© 2016

Monday, July 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yuko Onishi 13 August 2016

The image is beautiful. I love the third line....will you be my date?

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 August 2016

ha ha, glad you like that.

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Jenny Straton 11 August 2016

just want to say, another beautiful haiku. You espouse show not just tell very well.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 August 2016

thanks Jenny. thats been drilled in to me from school.

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Spock The Vegan 28 July 2016

Simple, but effective. Thanks for sharing.

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thank you Spock for your kind words.

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Paola Gianotti 28 July 2016

Oh! this is a beautiful haiku. I totally enjoyed the picture you have painted.

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I am so glad you enjoyed it

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Mike Cohen 28 July 2016

What a wonderful Haiku! Govind, you make the reader share in your experience and that is simply terrific

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Thank you sir. I try to do just that when I write haikus!

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