Could I Not? Poem by Lora Colon

Could I Not?

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If I were on the shore looking out toward the sea,
And from a distance, you beckoned to me,
Could I not tread water to reach you in haste,
To be held in your arms, and your kisses to taste?

If I were a garden wall made of rock and stone
And you, a vine, forsaken and alone,
How could I not invite you to boldly climb
Until I was covered by your foliage sublime?

If I were sure that it's my love you were craving,
And from a cloud, to me you were waving,
The embers of passion's fire having been stirred,
Could I not fly directly to you like a bird?

If you were to tell me I alone owned your heart,
How incomplete you feel when we're apart,
Even after death I shall not be forgot.....
Would I love you, too?My darling, how could I not!

Wednesday, December 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 28 December 2015

Clever use of metaphor to show your pure love. Beautiful.

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Jak Black 17 December 2015

This poem is expertly written, teasing and tantalising. Who's the lucky man, Lora?

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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