Your love flowed gently over me,
Like a wave caressing the shore,
Touching me... then covering me...
Leaving me begging for more
Your love, a magical potion,
Cleansing the wounds in my heart,
An elixir straight from heaven
That invited the healing to start
Your love, the fire I always dreamed
Would warm my winter night,
My sun... appearing in the rain,
To my darkness, bringing the light
Your love, a melody divine,
Love's symphony played anew,
My heart arranged each tender note....
The song that I heard was you
Your love, a perfectly sculpted rose
An angel laid at my feet,
Dare I press it to my heart....
Will the perfume still be sweet?
Your love... I wonder, will it endure....
How long can a dream survive?
Why do doubt and fear interpose...
Waiting for despair to arrive?
Your love, a wreath that heaven wove
And placed upon my head,
Yet, I'm gripped by fear this chain of love
Is no more than a slender thread
Good morning Poet Lora. Well, what is left to say. One would be hard pressed to find a more beautiful, passionate filled poem of love. This was spell bindingly beautiful! Well done, Loyd
A great love poem, it touches the depths of any heart that knows what love is.Great.
...The song I heard was you, What a great line. Your poem is wonderful, full of rhyme and had that feeling of..love being too good to be true in it. Good write
Fragility love...tenderness of love, that's just a real aspect of love. Thanks for sharing
The chain of love is just a slender thread.... it's your perception but can be very much generalized. Loved this beautiful poem.
Brilliant, thought provoking, intense, clear and very passionate. Well expressed thoughts and feelings set aside for sober reflection. Heartfelt poem with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Lora.
You have captured love and its uncertainties perfectly. Warm Regards, Bipasha
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it's amazing Lora how you capture the essence of love in this poem! the heart finds it too fragile to endure.