Count Back On Bygone Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Count Back On Bygone

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She remembers how she wept,
in her juvenile days, while her nipples still wet
the maiden demise, her kid brought
a face she wouldn't remember now

she still reminisces, in her robustage
when her eldest son in twenties
succumbed to a road accident
Cadaver lying right here, never to rise

She watched, in her sinking eyes
on wrinkling face, her huby's breathless body
lying, in the twilight, few full moons earlier
amidst grieving faces, right here

Her memory hasn't faded fully, yet
on her grandson's recent departure too.

Today, in the thickening purple light
she attempts to readjust images
in her feeble eye sockets
and separate out, this from that

She keeps focusing her sunken eye balls
thro' dangling entangled grey strands
over deepening facial contours
to assess and convince herself

who will be the next.........?

Count Back On Bygone
Friday, November 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,death,destiny,grief ,lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 05 December 2017

A sensitive write on the heart-ache of outliving your loved ones while perhaps still feeling young inside and remembering her youth and as age tangles the pathways to memory she perhaps only feels that something is not quite right.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2017

A poem on death, grief and lost love wirh heartfelt depiction. It may be quoted..... Her memory hasn't faded fully, yet on her grandson's recent departure too. Beautifully inscribed and amazingly shared.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 November 2017

How she wept! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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