Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
Jayatissa K. Liyanage
Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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Every War Fought..........

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First, within people
Then, under cover
Lastly, in the open
Winning and losing, simultaneously!
Wednesday, March 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: war
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COMMENTS
Mahtab Bangalee 14 October 2019
War grave digger Victory Flag flyer simultaneously! ! !
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 August 2018
A wonderful little poem (Haiku) ...insightful! Loved reading it.......................10
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Jette Blackstone 18 November 2017
That's the truth distilled into a few small lines.
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Savita Tyagi 09 August 2017
Very profound. All about war is said in so few words. Thanks for letting me know.
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Tom Allport 15 June 2017
a truthful poem of war that never changes.....people die people cry o why o why? ...........well writen
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Thank you Tom, for your comment.
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Uma Ram 14 March 2016
Very true sir...wars not only in fields but inside everyone...
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Navod Dilhara 29 February 2016
You have that peculiar rhythm always with you. Great poem.
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Kewayne Wadley 24 December 2015
Wisely crafted! Truly one whom speaks volumes. KW
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 24 December 2015
Thank you KW.
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Bri Edwards 30 April 2015
winning AND losing.............this IS something to think about. AND i just now noticed the use of loosing rather than losing. i've seen this error before, and i think i've made it myself at times! ! ! i know; it's hard to believe i would make an error! ! ! bri :) :) :)
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Thanks very much Bri for showing the typos.
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Bri Edwards 30 April 2015
i wish people who have 'wars within' (themselves) would just kill THEMSELVES. they should save others the trouble. .....................BUT............WAIT! What about us good guys aka the U.S. and India [oops! Sri Lanka i meant] et al? ? i'm, of course, only thinking about the other side aka the bad ones aka the ones with different views of their world! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - actually, since PH says you don't allow messages to be sent to you, i am being tricky and leaving two (2) messages here, under my poem comment! 1- which person is you in ‘your’ PH photo? the young guy or the old guy? ha ha 2. and here is my response to the poem comment you recently left me: your comment: Date & Time: 4/26/2015 11: 52: 00 PM Poem: 42092923 - Mrs. Toad Meets Mr. Toad …. [toad Creation; Courtship; Humor; Short Enough] Member: Jayatissa K. Liyanage Comment: Hi Bri, This is interesting. Its a mix of both science and poetry in a gentle way. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Jayatissa, i'm not always gentle in my poems. life just isn't that way. but, yes, Mr. and Mrs. Toad did not do combat, but just a little talking and spreading of their separate elements. I'm glad you enjoyed it. bri :)
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