Crescendo Poem by Rivi Rose

Crescendo

Rating: 5.0


Take me to bed
In the forest
So I can feel the cold damp earth
Against my naked back
Look up
And see in your eyes
A desire burning for eons
Draw the doubt from my soul
Through my lips
The only witnesses are the trees
As you press me into the ground
Electricity where our skin touches
The only sounds are our
Gentle hymnal moans between gulps of air
Kiss my translucent skin
Taste my hunger for you
As we reach a fervent crescendo
That rips me in half

Monday, April 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,love,passion,romance,sex
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 28 May 2018

Exotically romantic! Well conceived and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Rose and do remain enriched.

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Rivi Rose 28 May 2018

Thank you! !

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Fog Runner 30 April 2018

Galactic ecstasy, and perfectly believable; you waste no time inhaling your reader into your lusty craving.

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Rivi Rose 28 May 2018

Thank you!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 April 2018

I would love to have your remarks on my poem, The Forgotten Kiss.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 April 2018

Kiss my translucent skin Taste my hunger for you As we reach a fervent crescendo That rips me in half Wow Rivi, a powerful poem that describes the intensity of love within. Thanks for such an number.

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Rivi Rose 05 April 2018

Thank you for the kind words! I'm so glad you enjoyed.

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