Critiqued Poem by Meriki Raelene ParkinsonFraser

Critiqued



Stripped and exposed,
to those in the know.

I don't know my place;
where I will be safe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Mcleay 16 February 2010

Rae, you are safe with friends. You have so much to give

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Subbaraman N V 30 October 2007

In God's presence sure, when we are honest, truthful, full of love and compassion!

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