Cry 4 Her Poem by gary hicinbothem

Cry 4 Her

Rating: 4.5


As days go bye and tears for in my eyes,
I cry because she is not in my sight,
I want to do well but I want to fight,
Since we’ve got together,
I new my lie would be right,
I wonder if I can love somebody that I don’t know,
Because who knows she might be ju5t putting on a show,
Is what I feel love,

I wish I could get ju5t one hug,
Even know we don know each other can we bond,
Can I relationship go on, this is a poem not a song,
I hope this will go on,
Even if I cant see her beautiful face,

I love her I don’t care about her race,
I cry every night and feel like blood running down my cheeks,
Because I can not see her,
My eyes burn this poem is over it’s her turn.

Monday, December 22, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Douglass (Fifita) 31 December 2008

Beautiful poem. Sad though, but it prove how much you loved her, which is sweet.

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 26 December 2008

This is a great poem.10+.

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*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

I love her I don’t care about her race, I cry every night and feel like blood running down my cheeks, Because I can not see her, you shouldnt care about her race if you love her. the blood running down your cheeks is a great image for your reader. this gets your emotion across well, very sad. good job. Becca

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