Empty Becouse Of Her Poem by gary hicinbothem

Empty Becouse Of Her

Rating: 5.0


As I open my eyes and I cry,
Im all alone in my quit room,
My words are a whisper from the past,
My arms are empty because of her,
Everyone can kiss my but,
My heart is empty and now im starting to feel the tears form upon my cheeks I still wait upon the dead,
So that I can have her kisses,
I wait for her return home so that im no alone,
But 1 thing is that it’s hard loving a memory,
Loving a memory is allot easier than hating a memory,
I live my cousin’s memory with all my heart,
Everyone should know she is why my life has start,
She was and still is a very important girl at least she is in my world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 04 November 2008

wow Gary...so much pain in this one...well written...thanks for sharing....

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Chuck Petz 11 November 2008

A lot of feeling in this one. I guess that's art.

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Sebastine Humaemo 12 December 2008

great write gary.....can feel your love in the lines...thanks for sharing..............

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Brianna Trombley 03 December 2008

But 1 thing is that it’s hard loving a memory, Loving a memory is allot easier than hating a memory, i love these lines, so true, love the memories of the ones you lost, it makes it easier to cope with the pain

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Anita Blake 27 November 2008

i agree with Amy, great write

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<font color =fusha>Amy 24 November 2008

even though it was a sad message the emotion put into it, really achieved a great poem nice :)

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Annie Girl 24 November 2008

nice choice of words

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