I really need somehelp in my life,
Also love that always used to give me hugs,
Is no longer above,
She is now below with no face to show,
I still love her even now she is deceased,
I feel suicidal everyday of my life,
I really want to grab the knife,
So that I can cut,
Get the full loaded clip go bang,
Or ju5t let me hang,
Why do I always have to go through the suicidal game?
Every week every minute of the day I have no brake,
My body is now out of shape,
Will someone give me a hug will someone show me some love,
I don’t want anything if I can’t get it all,
I will get on my knees and craw for some love n care,
Why can’t I just have some love?
I have some pain,
I have so much shame I my life,
I dont play does games anymore,
Im soon gonna close the door,
Someone get me b-4 I do this n unload this clip in jp or me,
im one of the coldest,
Im not holding nobodies life in my hand
I can’t help you I can barely stand my self I got knifes n guns all over the,
Shelf.
sad but powerful, ive been there and understand that pain in this write.
loneliness....its a murderous feeling....suicide nt a remedy though...have faith on Allah...if evry1 levz us, bt allah iz always there...then y nt love allah and be hiz forever
I honestly understand what you'r saying, I've always felt like suicide was a game, Like a guessing game, I guess you could say, And the point of the game is to see how long it takes to take me life away, does that kind of express what your feeling?
i think you should read my poem 'Someone who can take your pain away.' i hope itll help you. im sorry for the pain and agnoy you feel....i really am..
your poem is so great! ! i love it! ! wow, suicide is not the best answer for love, love is silent but love is every where just got to gave someone a chance to prove love.....yup! ! love is worth living life....suicide is not the answer god will tell you when it your time to die! ! XOXO[KallieTRIGGER]
*gives you a hug* it's going to be ok. im in the same state at the moment. really. im getting help though. keep your head up. there is somebody out there for everybody. *hugs* :) ill be here for you to talk to if you want.
This poem is so deep, so much meaning and emotion, i cant relate to how you feel, but the poem helps.. its wonderful and sad at the same time... i hope you can find someone to show you love again..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is a very powerful poem... I really like it...it shows lots of pain...great last line good job. Becca