I do not understand, the pain of my loss is to much to handle,
all i say is, mommy drie your eyes,
mommy dont you cry all i wanna do is die,
i tell everyone who dont care about me to scramble,
it hurts that the words that ive said to her i connot say sorry,
the pain of my loss is to much to handle,
but i still love her even though she brings me pain,
even though my life is a game,
as days go bye i go insane more n more,
all over my body is sore why can't i just shut the door.
The emotion shines through this poem Gary.. well used words...thank you....xx
i also feel like if my mom really cares about me u know..... nice work
Great poem shows true heartfelt emotion good effort :)
great poem....full of emotions mixed with love..thanks for shairng...sebastine
your love for this person is so powerful, the loss of her is killing you, this shows in all your writings
so dont let her go....b with her, as she wz with u since so many years....mothered u more than being love...dont let her go
even though my life is a game, I feel that way... when my mom hurts me then says she is sorry over and over again. good job. Crystal
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Gary, I feel your pain in this poem