Do Not Understand Poem by gary hicinbothem

Do Not Understand

Rating: 4.8


I do not understand, the pain of my loss is to much to handle,
all i say is, mommy drie your eyes,
mommy dont you cry all i wanna do is die,
i tell everyone who dont care about me to scramble,
it hurts that the words that ive said to her i connot say sorry,
the pain of my loss is to much to handle,
but i still love her even though she brings me pain,
even though my life is a game,
as days go bye i go insane more n more,
all over my body is sore why can't i just shut the door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
maggie murray 04 November 2008

Gary, I feel your pain in this poem

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Fiona Davidson 04 November 2008

The emotion shines through this poem Gary.. well used words...thank you....xx

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Annie Girl 24 November 2008

i also feel like if my mom really cares about me u know..... nice work

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<font color =fusha>Amy 24 November 2008

Great poem shows true heartfelt emotion good effort :)

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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008

great poem....full of emotions mixed with love..thanks for shairng...sebastine

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Brianna Trombley 03 December 2008

your love for this person is so powerful, the loss of her is killing you, this shows in all your writings

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so dont let her go....b with her, as she wz with u since so many years....mothered u more than being love...dont let her go

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Anita Blake 27 November 2008

great poem. take care

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*Trusting You* 26 November 2008

even though my life is a game, I feel that way... when my mom hurts me then says she is sorry over and over again. good job. Crystal

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