Cuckoo Reminds Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Cuckoo Reminds

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I may be wrong
But I have never heard such melodies songs
Its presence in air speaks
I feel so high on peak

We are together and
Shall so forever
Yet those songs make me unseated
I feel glad and elated

Each day bring me fresh message
It can fill the full page
I would love to sing it again
It shall be sharing of pain

“Step one, Step out”
Leave everything in air to speak out
Nothing to bear in tiny mind
It is all for soul to find

I hear those musical notes
Beautiful words with quotes
It touches me like saint’s words
I love to catch those as grace from god

Cuckoo reminds of distant love
I too venture out and believe
Yes love, I miss and remember
How can you be forgotten in my heart chamber?

Wednesday, April 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

I may be wrong But I have never heart such melodies songs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi likes this. Lisa Lombardi love yours; word flow 27 mins · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi How can I lose something so precious, such is love. last line. ur style. Love always 26 mins · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

I love the abstract feeling! Sydney ParkLess than a minute ago I find it really interesting when poems are written without an explanation or without being straightforward. I love how i really had to read into it and interpret to find what I think the meaning of it is. It is not a cliche poem with lots of rhyming. This is true poetry with what seems to be a deep purpose. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

Metaphor really stood as something else Chelsea TrianoLess than a minute ago Great way of expanding the idea of being inspired and changed in heart through metaphorical ways Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

not for me. carlos trevizo2 minutes ago didnt hold my interest

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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