Blaine Strong


Cupids Trumpeteer - Poem by Blaine Strong

Maybe I'm a trumpets blast
Baby I'm gonna make it last
Standing cold and shivering
Loves warm touch left us quivering
Your voice cuts fast like flawless diamonds
Ripping my soul at the tattered seam
I woke from a dream without you
Love lacking like a withered desert lake
Still I feel for you, leaves to rake
Left me blind and alone
Lost and shoeless
I've no home anymore
At least until my fingers
Run the caverns of your hair
We both knew love
The things hiding there

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Cupids Trumpeteer by Blaine Strong

  • Kim Barney (12/13/2015 9:01:00 PM)


    Enjoyed the poem. You are missing a few apostrophes in the first few lines:
    Maybe I'm a trumpets blast
    Baby I'm gonna make it last
    Standing cold and shivering
    Loves warm touch left us quivering
    Should be:
    Maybe I'm a trumpet's blast
    Baby I'm gonna make it last
    Standing cold and shivering
    Love's warm touch left us quivering

    Also in the title: Cupids Trumpeteer
    should be: Cupid's Trumpeter

    Sorry. I can't help it. I used to be an English teacher!
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    Blaine Strong Blaine Strong (12/14/2015 12:08:00 PM)

    Thanks Kim, I will try to get around to editing it.
    I'm glad you enjoyed the poem

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/27/2015 1:11:00 PM)


    Love touches the warmness. This is very fantastic poem shared definitely. Very amazing.10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/27/2015 12:31:00 PM)


    Interesting poem...Good one (Report) Reply

    Blaine Strong Blaine Strong (11/27/2015 12:34:00 PM)

    Thank you so much

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/27/2015 12:06:00 PM)


    Standing cold and shivering
    Loves warm touch left us quivering Beautiful poetic lines, well composed poem, thanks for shsring.
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    Blaine Strong Blaine Strong (11/27/2015 12:35:00 PM)

    Thank you for the encouragement!

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2015



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