“Curse” word makes me to cry
What sense it makes when we try
To convey about displeasure
That it shall not occur in future
First as mother
More to endure
From child’s birth
Till her death
Whole of the family
Belongs to her really
She is incarnation
And stands holy in relation
As wife
She stands as knife
Cuts through all the troubles
Stands like rock and excels
“Home” as we call it heaven
The meaning is well taken
Woman is making it hell too
If we force her to reveal
Let curse befall on mankind
Instead to make her tolerate blindly
She must be give all her dues
Very respectfully behaved and viewed
Remember, we all owe existence
Not to god alone by chance
She is there as central figure
Our creator, savior and future
very good poem, mother/wife are the central figures. I request you to read my new poems and say something.
ve had thoughts along those lines myself woman the mother of existance Robert Rattley5 minutes ago yes i liked it
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Mitos Jane Nepomuceno and Kamalkant Sahoo like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Mitos Jane Nepomuceno and Kamalkant Sahoo like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
Impressive, inspiring. Retromantra A.K.A. Dave29 minutes ago Great poetry, a couple of things I would edit, In line 1 verse 1 change makes to causes it will read better, also change That to So in line 4 verse 1..........in verse 6 the word donate could substitute the word give in line 3. Hope this is a constructive comment. Comment +1 nice
Jawahar Gupta30 minutes ago I love the true feelings and expression...
Fátima Silva likes this. Fátima Silva beautiful poem, thank you friend Hasmukh Mehta 18 minutes ago · Unlike · 1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
“Curse” word makes me to cry What sense it makes when we try