chris urbaez

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Cut Me Up - Poem by chris urbaez

Take a knife and cut me up
If you hate me you wont stop
Make me feel the pain within
As your slitting through my
Makes me weaker as i bleed
For your mercy make me plead
Hear me screaming in the dark
As you leave your painfull
Blood is running down my face
As my body you erase
Trying to cut through every
On your shirt your leaving
I wish you knew i didnt care
If you hurt me everywhere
You can slit my skin apart
But you cant cut
Through my broken heart

Comments about Cut Me Up by chris urbaez

  • (11/12/2010 10:46:00 AM)

    It's really deep and i love it and the rythm sceem is so goos and it makes sence (Report) Reply

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  • (7/28/2010 1:21:00 PM)

    looks like my brother still got it (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2010 11:42:00 AM)

    this is amazing piece of writing. will u read some of my dark poems.
    really good work, well done
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  • (2/14/2010 12:08:00 PM)

    this is great. creepy but in a good way. I like the way you put words together to make your message clear. I AM FOREVER JEALOUS OF YOUR POETRY! ! ! this is being favorited. (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2010 10:35:00 AM)

    i love your poem i love dark poetry i write it my self have a look at im in control my new poem tel me what you think (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 10:42:00 AM)

    Thats Really Deep! I Love that you can express your self this way, its a good stress reliever. (Report) Reply

  • (1/8/2010 7:48:00 AM)

    : o
    soo friffin deep! ! ......LOVE it! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009

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