Cut The Ribbon, Pull The Bow Poem by Chuy Amante

Cut The Ribbon, Pull The Bow

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Cut the ribbons, pull the bow
We've got sun, we hate snow!

SATAN Claus will come tonight
tomorrow we'll all start to fight

For the pie and cookies too
Our Christmas day is like a zoo!

Wednesday, December 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Christmas
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 25 December 2014

Sarcastic and Yummy poem.I want to laugh Ha ha ha.Great N.B.

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Robert Plese 24 December 2014

I appreciate the first verse. I would omit the word the in...we hate the snow. As it does not add to the meaning and takes away from the flow.

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