Dad? ? Poem by confused teen

Dad? ?



You left this world without a trace
And now i can't reach your face
Where could you be
Why aren't you here with me
I'll make it threw this at my own pace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adam Reed 05 February 2010

not bad. straight to it. i made one called dear dad but i like the suddenness of yours better =)

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Adam Reed 05 February 2010

not bad. straight to it. i made one called dear dad but i like the suddenness of yours better =)

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Poetic Soul 05 February 2010

A brief write, but straight to the point.

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veary sad but touching poem. i do believe you have talent at such a young age. keep up the good work.

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Sarah Marie 05 February 2010

this is a very beautiful poem. It is short, simple, and to the point. Who knew so little words could mean so much. very beautiful.

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