confused teen

Rookie (13 / arizona)

Dad? ? - Poem by confused teen

You left this world without a trace
And now i can't reach your face
Where could you be
Why aren't you here with me
I'll make it threw this at my own pace


Comments about Dad? ? by confused teen

  • Adam Reed (2/5/2010 11:43:00 PM)


    not bad. straight to it. i made one called dear dad but i like the suddenness of yours better =) (Report) Reply

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  • Adam Reed (2/5/2010 11:43:00 PM)


    not bad. straight to it. i made one called dear dad but i like the suddenness of yours better =) (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 10:46:00 PM)


    A brief write, but straight to the point. (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 10:02:00 PM)


    veary sad but touching poem. i do believe you have talent at such a young age. keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 9:30:00 PM)


    this is a very beautiful poem. It is short, simple, and to the point. Who knew so little words could mean so much. very beautiful. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 5, 2010



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