confused teen

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Life's Murder - Poem by confused teen

Poeple say god took you away
But it was life that took you on that horid day
I hear our song and think of your smile
Why can't you come back and stay awhile
When you were here everything was okay


Comments about Life's Murder by confused teen

  • Adeline Foster (10/17/2011 3:39:00 PM)


    I agree, it is a sad age in which to live such sorrow. Perhaps poetry offers some solace. I offer you mine to comfort you.
    Adeline
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  • Adam Reed (2/5/2010 11:45:00 PM)


    revealin your emotions just a little at a time. not bad (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 11:20:00 PM)


    you have REALLY GREAT poems... I know it's hard making a poem of something else, but these poems are just fantastic... But nobody should go through that... (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 10:06:00 PM)


    you know that's true. when you had someone you feel close to just dies or slips away. you think that's it life's over. but it's not. it just needs a little time. veary nice poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, February 5, 2010


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