Carrie Salazar

Rookie (11 03 91 / Harrah\Oklahoma)

Daddy - Poem by Carrie Salazar

I pray for you every day
I pray that you will be saved
I don’t want you to go to Hell
but that is where you are headed

O Lord please save my daddy
He is a good daddy he
just isn’t saved
open his heart

I remember you braiding my hair
when I was real little
I remember you making beans
and me eating them on the floor.

Lord don’t let him go to hell
please, please open his heart
he is getting older and weaker
please God I love him.

Daddy I love you
please open up ur heart
Daddy don’t go to hell
Daddy listen to God.


Comments about Daddy by Carrie Salazar

  • (1/8/2007 11:01:00 PM)

    Carrie that is a very heart felt poem, that really touched my heart deeply, a beautiful poem, just keep writing you do have a gift. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 7, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 18, 2010


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