Daddy Poem by Caitlin Whiley

Daddy

Rating: 5.0


You. Were funny
You were great
When I needed it you
Dished out the money
You drove me around
From place to place
I will never forget your face
All through the
Day all through the night
I will never for get u
Not at all
I also know you would of catched
me when I fall
I love you daddy
Xoxoxo

I miss you so much I think of you every second of the day and every second of the night


I LOVE YOU..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Caitlin. w 19 July 2009

R u all talking to me or megan...thanks.illy try right new one soon.

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Makayla Straight 19 July 2009

This is a very good poem. I am sorry to hear that, he is never around... I know how that feels with my mother.

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Anjali Sinha 19 July 2009

lovely tribute from a grateful child anjali

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~ Jon London ~ 19 July 2009

well expressed piece Caitlin......there's a love here...like no other....great work...keep penning you have a gift for writing my friend

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Caitlin. w 18 July 2009

Bit his been through heaps with my mum.: (

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Caitlin. w 03 November 2009

i dont have a dad.... my teacher dont either -=[ =[ =[ rip

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 July 2009

It is a good God's gift to have a dad.

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Heather Hill 22 July 2009

This was good at least u know ur dad my dad left my mom when i was like born or something like that long story...but you go through can make u stronger u just gotta believe that you can make it...don't worry bout what others thing cuz they dont matter only u do...u gotta stand up and show everyone that ur tougher than they are don't let anyone else tell u otherwise...just remember one thing for sure u are who u make urself to be

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Caitlin. w 19 July 2009

Yeah well I just wish he know how hurt I am... I'm not good at rightin poems.. Cheers caitlin

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Patrick A. Martin 19 July 2009

i know this sound tough but u can't change yr dad but u can change u sweetheart u have to get on with yr life and hey you have a gift for writing get into it. I like your ryheme it rocks,

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