Caitlin Whiley

Daddy

You. Were funny
You were great
When I needed it you
Dished out the money
You drove me around
From place to place
I will never forget your face
All through the
Day all through the night
I will never for get u
Not at all
I also know you would of catched
me when I fall
I love you daddy
Xoxoxo

I miss you so much I think of you every second of the day and every second of the night


I LOVE YOU..

Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 16, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, July 17, 2009

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  • Caitlin. w (11/3/2009 4:52:00 PM)

    i dont have a dad.... my teacher dont either -=[ =[ =[ rip

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (7/25/2009 11:53:00 AM)

    It is a good God's gift to have a dad.

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  • Heather HillHeather Hill (7/22/2009 10:41:00 PM)

    This was good at least u know ur dad my dad left my mom when i was like born or something like that long story...but you go through can make u stronger u just gotta believe that you can make it...don't worry bout what others thing cuz they dont matter only u do...u gotta stand up and show everyone that ur tougher than they are don't let anyone else tell u otherwise...just remember one thing for sure u are who u make urself to be

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  • Caitlin. w (7/19/2009 11:30:00 PM)

    Yeah well I just wish he know how hurt I am...
    I'm not good at rightin poems..
    Cheers caitlin

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  • Patrick A. Martin (7/19/2009 9:06:00 PM)

    i know this sound tough but u can't change yr dad but u can change u sweetheart u have to get on with yr life and hey you have a gift for writing get into it. I like your ryheme it rocks,

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  • Caitlin. w (7/19/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    R u all talking to me or megan...thanks.illy try right new one soon.

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  • Makayla StraightMakayla Straight (7/19/2009 9:35:00 AM)

    This is a very good poem. I am sorry to hear that, he is never around... I know how that feels with my mother.

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  • Anjali Sinha (7/19/2009 8:16:00 AM)

    lovely tribute from a grateful child
    anjali

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (7/19/2009 6:38:00 AM)

    well expressed piece Caitlin......there's a love here...like no other....great work...keep penning you have a gift for writing my friend

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  • Caitlin. w (7/18/2009 10:18:00 PM)

    Bit his been through heaps with my mum.: (

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  • Caitlin. w (7/18/2009 10:04:00 PM)

    NO.my dad is not good either he live like 30 min from my house never comes see me never rings me.we. Talk 1 in 2 months.
    He changed since he remarried..yeah my mum n dad split wen I was 8..

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  • Megan Morquecho (7/18/2009 9:10:00 PM)

    you have a good father cherish him..mine isnt the best in the world he was never around and is hooked on cocain going on 10 years now..

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  • Caitlin. w (7/17/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    Yeah in 3 years it will as I'm can make my own choice as I'll be 18
    ..thanks...yeah I'm in yr 9 n still can't read good or spell good.but I don't care I'll get better one day..
    :) . :) .

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  • Danny H (7/17/2009 2:16:00 AM)

    I really like this poem, even though it didnt go into depth it showed your pain for someone who you cant see :) hope it gets better

    and fyi milica franchi for someone telling someone they have spelling errors
    you cant spell as well, so leave us alone who cant spell
    for I am one of them :)
    Spell check is my best friend
    Lovely poem

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  • Caitlin. w (7/17/2009 12:47:00 AM)

    Ok.well I'll just leave it as I can't spell or read well..lol

    Thanks.xox

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  • Elizabeth Marco (7/16/2009 10:10:00 PM)

    Good job! Keep it up!

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  • Milica Franchi De Luri (7/16/2009 10:04:00 PM)

    I like the poem, keep on writing, but you have few mistakes in there, so go back to ' Menage my poems' and edit it............

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  • Caitlin. w (7/16/2009 9:16:00 PM)

    This is the first poem I wrote..hope u all like it

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