Daddy Poem by Elissa McDonald

Daddy

Rating: 4.7


It breaks my heart
Knowing your not by my side
That you never will be replaced
As the tears run down my cheek
I wish i could see your smile one lasts time
My heart breaks knowing your never coming back

Saturday, September 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lost father
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
FOR MY DAD WHO PAST WAY WHEN I WAS TWO MONTHS OLD
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 29 October 2017

A very touchy poem in loving memory of a lost father. Loved your poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Elissa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Unknown Spirit 10 September 2016

dear Elissa it seems you have lost your father. i truly and sincerely give my condolence to you. your words convey the mood of missing a precious and as you said unreplacable person in your life but patience is the best option. by gods own permission i belive your father shall be harbored in Eden and lead a peaceful life. i really enjoyed your poem. thanks.

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Elissa Mcdonald 26 October 2017

thank you

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