Daddy Poem by lilly mandrell

Daddy

Rating: 3.2


Are you mad at me?
Daddy.
Do you hate me?
Daddy.
Do you hate what I do,
Who I am,
What I listen to?
Daddy

Why cant you except me?
Daddy.
Why cant you be happy for me?
Daddy.
Will you just love me,
Trust me,
Be there for me?
Daddy

I hate you.
Daddy.
I’m mad at you.
Daddy.
You don’t see it,
Feel it,
Understand it.
Daddy

Go away.
Daddy.
Leave me alone.
Daddy.
Let me be,
Set me free,
Exit my life.
Daddy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adrian Murphy 15 September 2009

A poem full of raw emotion - such sadness and anger. Just goes to prove the old saying about families - can't live with them, can't live without them. Adrian

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januel l 26 December 2008

i love this, i actually have one kind of like this, its great, i understand it

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Scott Austin 12 March 2008

This write is full of powerful emotions, but understand your daddy may only wants what is best for you even though you may not agree with him. Scott

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This is powerful, moving. You swept me up and carried me all the way to the end. Thank you for a lovely ride. Peace, L&T

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Halima Ahmed 28 December 2007

i like this poem! well written

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