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If I chose this rocky path
then why do I fight
to walk through fields
of plush daisies.

You say I desire pain
and walk away from love,
but I opened the gate
you failed to find.
So, who then is to blame?
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*Trusting You* 11 June 2009
this is amazingly put together my friend... great great job here V. that person you're seeking is a reflection of your mind. I love those lines. Becca
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Who Iam 15 October 2008
Much thought and sensitivity within these lines young lady. The metophores of a rocky path, a field of daisies, and you opening the gate, makes me feel someone's heart was broken along the way. Hopefully they have found a different path full of sunflowers and sunshine! Well done.
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for that glorious field of plush daisies..... nay the relections of your mind ..... the narcissist in your head
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David Threadgold 02 October 2008
Hi Viola. Keep chasing the daisies but remember the dont grow well in the shade. well done thanks for the read. Regards Dave T
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Tom Balch 02 October 2008
Dont let the shadows chill your glow, be true to you,10 Regards Tom
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