Damn Poem by Sue DeRochie

Damn

Rating: 5.0


A big beaver built a large dam
In a pond where he ate and he swam
He got caught in a trap
With a big sounding snap
That's the end of that pond's logjam.

Wednesday, March 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: animal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

Beautiful piece of poetry elegantly embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Sue.

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Mj Lemon 15 March 2017

Hilarious! Welcome to Poem Hunter, Sue. This is a terrific limerick.Sad to see such a fate befall a national symbol, though....really well done! A 10.

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Kim Barney 15 March 2017

Nice limerick, Sue. You have a consistent syllable count of 8,8,6,6,8. Well done and welcome to Poem Hunter!

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