two steps forward
one step back
a typical life
life is on track
one step forward
two steps back
to be expected
another setback
listen to the music
less attention to the feet
life grows surer -
happier - sweet
'One step forward, three steps back' is one of my husbands favorite expressions. Your poem is a great interpretation of that concept. Thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hi Harlan, thanks for sending your lovely comments about my poem i really appreciate. i am happy to know you share the same feeling sand can relate to my poems, if you enjoyed you can read more poems of mine. i really liked your poem this is life and this is livinng. very good rhyme scheme. well done. i would like to tell you that i am in artist myself and have done pencil sketches, water painting and oil painting too. take care and keep in touch. seema