Dance Quickly Now Poem by Ben Partenay

Dance Quickly Now

Rating: 5.0


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Dance, I said to the boy in the glass
Staring back at me with a darkening mask
Dance, I begged, with love and pain
Dance, please dance, oh dance again
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Dance with the moon in the child’s eye
Circling the middle as black as coal
Dance quickly now, its leaving soon
Light of the moon and the child’s soul

Dance with the sun in the child’s laugh
Bouncing round off sinister things
Dance quickly now, with crystal prism
Scattering wisdom, melting wings

Dance with the rain in the child’s tear
Watching the clouds attack then stop
Dance quickly now, the storm has shattered
All that mattered, with a single drop

Dance with the hope in his stuttered speech
Holding it close for a later year
Dance quickly now, before he serves
Nonsense words, in a busted mirror

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Though the moon may spin and the sun revolve
Though love still waits and the rain still falls
Though the child may laugh he glares inside
Exhaling life with a sudden sigh
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 24 May 2017

Dance with the moon in the child’s eye Light of the moon and the child’s soul sun in the child’s laugh the rain in the child’s tear hope in his stuttered speech.. till here i read and was very happy. But the last line..... made me sad. Exhaling life with a sudden sigh a great poem with wonderful expressions and imagination. thank you for sharing. tony

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Seamus O Brian 03 November 2016

I enjoyed this piece immensely, and look forward to reading more of your work. Well done!

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Anjana Aravind 07 August 2006

This changing phase is a bane and a boon at the same time. You have expressed it very beautifully Nice poem Anjana

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Lea Simpson 30 January 2006

Sometimes the biggest insult to change, are those things that defiantly remain the same. Damned moon. A beautiful write.

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