Dancing Leaves Poem by Clarie Sweet

Dancing Leaves

Rating: 5.0


As I sit here reading my book the wind begins to wrestle and the leaves begin to dance as if they were putting on a show

They twirled this way and spun that way like dancers making a story with there movements across the meadow trail

Then the wind slows down and the leaves take a bow as they lay on the ground to rest.

Friday, March 13, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,leaves,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 08 April 2009

The connection you have made between you and the nature is just superb. The poem has been written with a good observational method..........beautiful....10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 March 2009

Simple but beautiful write. Great intimacy with nature. Deserves 10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Wildan F Rabbani 23 March 2009

The wind flattered around the leaves It must be a wonderful scene

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