Dark Ablution Poem by Louis Cecile

Dark Ablution

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Translucent movement
What can you see?
Enveloping the city, death and misery
Sub zero reveals your breath
Something in the air to ponder who will die next

Desire takes form
Yet nothing you can see
Though at the end there is a sensation
A cloud gathers releasing precipitation

The storm passes over for those of a colour
They see a new chosen race
The summoner watches hoping for his kind to embrace

Gentle movement, soft is the touch
When victims are seen
They enter the never-ending dream
Hardened and violent
What once was soft now juxtaposed
Though continuous its flow

Crystallisation
Reflects
Becomes blinding
Awake for penetration
Ablution for dark salvation

Entombed the remains of life
Condense an aura of suspense
Nothing can circumvent
It will not relent
Condensation, a revelation
The process starts once again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 18 October 2011

Beautiful vocabulary you penned all with grace.. Good poem..Top marks

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