Daily Commute Poem by Louis Cecile
Daily Commute
A daily view both near and far
Awash with emotion a yearly commotion
A sea of upturned smiles
Comfort defiled
Repetition is an updated edition
Enforced is our journey
We travel with haste
Disembarked into a land of waste
Barely able to gaze at another man’s face
Footsteps of the damned
Though separated we walk hand in hand
Hypnotic the rhythm as we face indecision
Our hearts sorrowed by the incision
A way of life so cruel
your poem is from the heart full of emotions where we readers think about
I love this poem.i feel like i have writen it before in different words.
Splendid write of yours.Daily commute is like the democracy of thoughts which speak each other in silence, in glance on each other and then finds newspapers, agencies, radios up to express them in concrete views.You found poetry.We found expressions impressive.
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I would like to translate this poem
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1/15/2025 12:46:06 PM # 1.0.0
What a powerful poem, quite intense! It produced an interesting feel, I could feel myself in the subway train hypnotyzed by its rhythm. Thank you!