Javier Falcon

Rookie - 129 Points (October 11,1990 / Miami, Florida)

Dark Entity - Poem by Javier Falcon

In those moments of life,
where light doesn't seem to shine,
as shadows corrode your thoughts,
causing pain and havoc;

Drowning you in forever darkness,
clouding up your judgement,
feeling alone in this obscurity,
forever hungry for happiness.

There is not much to do,
than to follow those entities,
dark in existence and matter,
hoping to someday reach the light.


Comments about Dark Entity by Javier Falcon

  • Alexander Hale (10/12/2008 8:58:00 PM)

    amazing. very well written. (Report)Reply

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  • May Namoc (10/9/2008 1:55:00 PM)

    two opposites in life. Light and Dark. ^^ great peice, javi! <33 luv it.

    May
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  • Ershad MazumderErshad Mazumder (10/6/2008 10:39:00 AM)

    Darkness and light are two faces of one coin. I love this excellant piece dear Javier. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 5, 2008



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