Night dark but your lies were darker
Night cruel but your love more crueler
Night all alone yet better than your absent minded with me
Night was the time i gave my whole to you
Night was the time you slapped my face
Night was the day you pushed me to the door.
Night was the time you abused me
Night was the time you slit my tongue
Night was the time the moon refuses to smile at us
Night was the time i lost you
Night was the time you left me all in the rain
Night was the time i cry you a river
Night under the tree you promise me your undying love
Night was the time you bid me goodbye
Night was the time you threw a stone into my glassy world.
A great anaphora; using night to create a parallelism and explicit metaphors.
your lies were darker your love more crueler Night was the time you slit my tongue Night was the time i cry you a river, such a fine and lovely poem .. sadness at ist core. The sense of loss and abuse. Love and its strange ways… cruelty in ist cruellest form. Thank you dear poetess for this gift of a poem from you…….. thank you again. tony
Continue to keep the flow of the poetic inspiration flowing. You have written a very good poem.
great great work. I like tha parallelism used here. Wonderful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A sad but very beautiful poem. Great write.