Dark Of The Night... Poem by Geoff Warden

Dark Of The Night...

Rating: 5.0


Within the darkness of shadows Vail,
And closer to the skin then hair,
That moment of grand illusion,
complexes the touch of share.

Gaze deep within those eyes,
Look beyond that that is fear,
Hear not the mournful cries,
As Stance has its' rightful peer..

Turn, but move will not go,
walk closer, its' almost so real,
Dream, if allowing spirit to flow,
Bath, in the stream serial.

GJW 3/3/07

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diane Violet 31 March 2007

I've read this one a few times Geoff...well-crafted...yes! Haunting images, well expressed. 'Look beyond that that is fear', Turn, but move will not go'...........

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Not a member No 4 15 March 2007

Haunting, ephemeral images and thoughts, poetically expressed, that tantalise, even ensnare the reader. Very effective use of partial glimpses and devices. Very impressive poem on a very evasive theme.

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Surreal... well-selected words well crafted G. t x

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