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Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Darkness

Rating: 4.6
Covered by darkness
There is no escape
All because of one little mistake
They show no love
They see no pain
As you shed tears of blood
This steady rain
Walk through the walls
And see all the scars
Remember the times
When you could look up and see stars
What happened to the light
What happened to the dreams
All crushed by a monster
It tore me at the seams
Trapping me in darkness
I simply can’t break free
As I cry out for help
Why has god locked me in misery?
Brooke Ashlyn
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COMMENTS
Anna Wilson 29 July 2010
wow, that was a really powerful poem.
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Kieran J96 29 July 2010
a poem of beauty and darkness mixed together perfectly. creatively, darkly and emotionally beautiful!
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Patrick A. Martin 31 August 2009
Again you write it from where you feel it Brook you have the protential to become a great writer I hope you reach that protential.10 again
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Dylan Oppedahl 14 July 2009
As you shed tears of blood This steady rain That is beautifully depressing
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 July 2009
Misery is the key to a better life.Trust me! Nice writes Brooke. Brett.
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