Brooke Ashlyn

Imaginary Dream

Scars on my wrist
It was to hard to resist
As the tears stream down my face
I dream of leaving this place
Stuck in a world no one understands
No one knows what God holds in his hands
As I press the blade against my skin
One cut for every sin
Time to let go
Time to give in
Try to cover the pain
Try to hide all my scars
Inside and out this life is ending
After all the time we are spending
I let go of this world
Dying it seems
leaving this earth a once imaginary dream.

Poem Submitted: Monday, July 13, 2009

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  • Hope Anderson (12/6/2011 2:13:00 PM)

    i dont think that you should cut yourself at all if stuff is bothering you try to do something els like writing poems like your doing wright now or stories or punch things thats what my doctor told me and even my best friend and i know one thing foreshore that God doesn't wont you to cut yourself he doesn't wont any one to how i know that is because i am a christian and my dad is a preacher so i'm a PK and i really really love God. I hope you don't think i'm being rude or anything i'm just trying to help you and any one els going threw a problem i've been threw so some problems in my life, but i try not to think about them so think about it k.: +)

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  • Fo Bellefluer (9/30/2009 9:41:00 PM)

    I loved it so much and i couldn't agree with how your are feeling any more than you just described. keep writing i love it ill read more of your later! you should read some of mine too: ]

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  • Dylan Oppedahl (7/14/2009 5:05:00 PM)

    leaving this earth a once imaginary dream

    That's a great line. The poem was great, depressing, but great

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  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (7/13/2009 1:56:00 PM)

    This is a sad poem. There is so much you can yet discover. Try the calming effect of reading others poems. Some are very good - try mine.
    Adeline

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