Brooke Ashlyn

No One Knows

Everyone keeps there distance
No one knows when you fall out of existence
Dying inside and living in a dream
Lost inside tearing at the seams
An open book no one looks inside
A living being one who never opens their eyes
Crying in a nightmare a never ending hell
Wanting to scream please break this spell
Like a curse you can not break
Like a nightmare you can not escape
Screaming voices that fill your head
No one know your almost dead
Kill a dream and steal a smile
End this life that once was an innocent child
Misery fills their heart
Images kill you from the start
All alone tearing you apart
Ao one knows your dying heart

Poem Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 26, 2011

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Comments about No One Knows by Brooke Ashlyn

  • Kieran J96 (7/29/2010 3:34:00 AM)

    i can relate to this, u seeem to capture how so many people feel

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  • Gold Fish (10/9/2009 6:49:00 PM)

    I can relate to the words and emotions in your poem. It's like an Invisible Disease. What people can't see they don't believe exists. Keep writing from the heart.

    I think you would like some of my poems they are in a similar vein.
    See The Invisible Disease and Depression

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/matthew-de-gasperi/

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  • Nikunj Sharma (8/12/2009 10:46:00 PM)

    Kill a dream and steal a smile
    End this life that once was an innocent child


    Nice poem, written from heart..........gud work. Pls spare time and read mine as well

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  • Shekhar JoshiShekhar Joshi (6/18/2009 2:41:00 PM)

    i can almost identify with this poem.........no one caring and knowing or tryin to know about how bad your condition is.........

    excellent poem...

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