Darkness Poem by Kasi Navadomskis

Darkness

Rating: 4.8


When darkness sets in i am so alone
I have no where to go, no one to love me as deep as he did
He left my side, leaving tears of pain in my eyes
I still sit here today and cry
He left me with his last words funing through my mind over and over again
The precious beautiful words i will never forget...
'I love you and always will'
How sad that left me with the thought of love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Jane Massie 19 December 2007

beautiful! is it about mike as well? because we both need to realize hes a weirdo. and not worth our time!

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Emo Seb 04 March 2008

wow...its like yer writing my thoughts, man! ! ! killer poem! <3 Seb

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Keith Hendrickson 19 June 2009

this is probably my favorite one so far. it reminds me of a few of my pieces. if you get a chance to read them i hope you enjoy my work as much as i enjoy yours...

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love would rise again. and things would be better! !

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Carissa Mcbride 25 September 2008

guys are only good for one thing and there usually not that good at that.

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~ Jon London ~ 07 June 2008

Intense emotional write, .......deep expression, opens a door to a world of darkness that craves the light........amazing piece keep expressing '10 Jon

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 April 2008

you 'll find the ray of light in the end of....................

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