Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Darkness, Man, And God! Comments

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lonliness...
the soul cried out for
the presence of god,
even while held in the womb!
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Eric Cockrell
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Kaila George 12 June 2012

That is a very deep poem...hmmm....its true though, humanity often think they are better than their gods, why do they exceed their expectations, had to read it few times, but it really got to me once I understood, forgive me but im like that takes time for things to sink in..(rolls my eyes at my own fallacy) Im a backwards born again christain or what they say sliding...but even though I no longer believe in mans doctrines I still believe in god, or the creator as others would say, and my faith is whats helped in my hour of need. Hmmm babbling...but its very insightful how you put it and looking at how many poems you have writen looks like ill be here awhile....(grins) thank you for sharing.

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Raja Nosherwan 12 June 2012

I can picture it in all in my head, a true picture, true to the hatred that a common man begets. A good write.

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