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Davids Sling 519 - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Iv got some silver bullets, and a
wooden cross, and a copy of the
bible, with all the wisdom and love,
Iv got rosery beads, hanging from
my hand, and some holy water,
with a book of prayers, IV got
incence burning, and a shrine in
the back, and a picture of jesus,
with his hands in the air, got
some christen music, with a
four, four beat, gonna play it
hard, yea, just wait and see.
I got a map of heaven, and a
key to the stars, a visa in my
pocket, so i dont get lost,
yea, im all ready for the big
event, gonna walk on water
and fly thruogh the air.

Comments about Davids Sling 519 by DAVID GERARDINO

  • (7/6/2005 10:27:00 PM)

    david it has potential with a little work it would suit the church scene perhaps you could play it to some people who listen to that kind of music and ask them for there response i think you need to add a few more lines and maybe a chorus
    as a poem just a spellcheck and it is fine as it is

    Warm regards allan

    i have been away in a little place called ballina

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  • (7/4/2005 9:34:00 PM)

    ok, thats thats, this is the third time working with this poem/song
    if any one cares, theres chords that can go with it.........

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 4, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, September 12, 2005

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