Davids Sling 519 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Davids Sling 519

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Iv got some silver bullets, and a
wooden cross, and a copy of the
bible, with all the wisdom and love,
Iv got rosery beads, hanging from
my hand, and some holy water,
with a book of prayers, IV got
incence burning, and a shrine in
the back, and a picture of jesus,
with his hands in the air, got
some christen music, with a
four, four beat, gonna play it
hard, yea, just wait and see.
I got a map of heaven, and a
key to the stars, a visa in my
pocket, so i dont get lost,
yea, im all ready for the big
event, gonna walk on water
and fly thruogh the air.

Monday, July 4, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: silver
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan James Saywell 06 July 2005

david it has potential with a little work it would suit the church scene perhaps you could play it to some people who listen to that kind of music and ask them for there response i think you need to add a few more lines and maybe a chorus as a poem just a spellcheck and it is fine as it is Warm regards allan i have been away in a little place called ballina

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David Gerardino 04 July 2005

ok, thats thats, this is the third time working with this poem/song if any one cares, theres chords that can go with it.........

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