Dawn Poem by ENOCH JOHN

Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Grey
is the Dawn, opening

the book
of a new day

the rainbow
an esplanade, traversing

the sky's rim.

sky
is a blue-like veil
hung in suspense, leaping

over
day's painted cumuli
and cirrus white-

white as starched linen
or crisp paper

crisper
than the green
and regal grass, stalking

the silent hill.

Friday, March 7, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautifully descriptive and continuously woven til the end.Love it! ! ! ! ! !

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Shimon Weinroth 13 September 2008

lovely poem a harmony of pictures I am subjective it is the time of day that i await best wishes Shimon

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 August 2008

...a fine expression indeed....10

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